Where the Styx Runs Cold, Ch 12: The Whispers of Control Pt. 1
Hawke forces a meeting with a god. Unarmed and isolated, he and Rita enter the lion's den to negotiate the future of Styx Squad or die trying.
SERIALIZED FICTIONWHERE THE STYX RUNS COLD
11/30/202510 min read


Arthur Hawke had forced a god to acknowledge his existence. Now came the harder part: convincing him not to erase it.
The coordinates on his datapad were an invitation. The triumph of outmaneuvering Cromwell dissolved into cold preparation. This wasn't tactics anymore. This was theology, and he had an audience with a deity.
They abandoned the French farmhouse for a forgotten vineyard in Tuscany-ancient stone, distant from their usual reality. Here, Hawke began planning the most important conversation of his life.
His war room became the estate's wine cellar. It was subterranean and cool, lit only by a single bulb and the green glow of his datapad. His entire arsenal: the terrified, brilliant mind of Elias Jenkins.
Their sessions weren't interrogations. Intensive debriefings, feverish and relentless. Hawke needed context, connections, the philosophy behind the "Devil's Ledger." He needed to understand Neil Klein's empire.
Each piece Jenkins offered made the picture clearer. More monstrous. Hawke mapped it on his datapad, stylus blurring, creating flowcharts that made his head spin. Klein's network was parasitic, tentacles sunk deep into global finance, politics, the superhuman world. He funded governments and the insurgents destabilizing them. He owned the companies building SHEPARD's prisons and the black-market syndicates creating the need for them. He was the architect of the chaos SHEPARD contained.
From this, Hawke formulated demands that were audacious-bordering on insane. First, the personal: complete amnesty for Styx Squad, permanent deactivation of their termination trackers, release of Elias Jenkins into their custody.
But he reached further. His final demand: fundamental restructuring of SHEPARD's charter regarding superhumans. A new oversight committee with real teeth, designed to prevent another Medved, to end treating human beings as assets. He would force Klein's hand, make his instrument of control more just.
The strategy created friction. The tension boiled over one evening.
"I don't like it, Arthur." Breaker's rumble echoed from the stone doorway. "This is insane. We have the dirt on him. Enough to burn his world down. We should be planning a data leak, a getaway. You and Rita walking in there with no guns, no backup? What stops Klein from putting a bullet in your head?"
Hawke looked up. He understood Cole's fear-a soldier's logic. "Because a bullet is messy, Cole. And Neil Klein is not a messy man. His objective isn't my death. It's containing Jenkins' information. Killing me risks triggering the leak he's preventing. Makes me a martyr, makes you a rogue variable. Bad tactics."
He stood. "And we can't just burn his world down. If we destroy the network, the power vacuum creates civil wars. Klein's tentacles are the only thing keeping a dozen conflicts from exploding. We need to repurpose the network, not destroy it."
He met Cole's eyes. "The fight's changed. Our weapon isn't fists or powers anymore. It's the threat of chaos. He has to negotiate. You have to trust me. Trust I can win a war fought with words."
Breaker exhaled, long and frustrated. "I trust you, Arthur. I just don't trust bastards in suits who think they're gods." He turned, walked away, leaving Hawke alone with that trust's weight.
***
While Arthur waged tactical war, Rita engaged in different preparation.
Her battlefield: the narrative. Her objective: understanding Neil Klein himself. Her sessions with Jenkins took place in the sun-drenched garden. She needed his soul.
Elias drowned in stolen thoughts. The "Devil's Ledger" was more than data-a psychic imprint of Klein's vast, cold consciousness, colonizing his mind. Rita's first task: calm him, create a quiet island in the storm.
She didn't ask about numbers or structures. She asked about recurring themes, philosophical snippets, the emotional tone of decision-making.
"He doesn't feel… anything," Elias whispered one afternoon. "That's the terrifying part. I have memories of him ordering a corporate takeover that ruined thousands of lives, and the decision process was identical to choosing lunch. Just… efficient. He sees a problem, an inefficiency, and corrects it. No regard for human cost."
As Jenkins spoke, Rita connected with the psychic residue he carried. She felt the shape of Neil Klein's will, the grand story he told himself.
He wasn't lusting for power. In his mind, Neil Klein was a shepherd. A caretaker. A reluctant god. He viewed humanity as fundamentally flawed, chaotic, self-destructive. Our emotions, nationalisms, passions-our fatal flaws.
His network wasn't an empire of greed. It was life-support for a dying species. He was the dispassionate, superior will required to guide the herd from the cliffs. He funded both sides of conflicts not for profit, but to control outcomes. He saw himself as the ultimate pragmatist, the only adult in a nursery of irrational children.
She brought this insight to Arthur.
"You're preparing to negotiate with a man who believes he's a god, Arthur." Her voice quiet. "Worse, he has mountains of evidence supporting his divinity."
Arthur looked up, grim. "How do you fight that?"
"You don't." Rita said. "You can't appeal to his morality-he believes his actions transcend it. You can't threaten his empire-he sees it as global salvation. Attacking on those grounds only confirms you're another irrational element to control or erase."
She held his gaze. "Reframe your approach. You can't walk in as a rebel demanding justice. Enter as a peer, an equal, a fellow architect who's identified a flaw in his design. Your argument can't be that what he's doing is wrong. It must be that his methods are inefficient. Medved was inefficient. Serpent's Coil was inefficient. Your proposal for reformed SHEPARD isn't a moral demand-it's a logical, stable, efficient upgrade to his existing system."
She saw the struggle in his eyes. "Speak his language, Arthur. Systems, assets, efficiency. Convince the shepherd you've found a better way to manage his flock, not for the flock's sake, but for his own. Your conviction can't be in the rightness of your cause. It must be in the logic of your solution."
Horrifying. Cynical. But the only path that didn't end in immediate destruction.
***
Two days before departure, a second encrypted packet arrived from Cromwell. A protocol document. As Hawke scrolled through cold, green text on his datapad, any hope for straightforward negotiation died. The terms systematically stripped every advantage. Rules for a supplicant entering a king's court.
"Protocol Alpha-Zero." Unprecedented designation.
First, isolation. "Attendees: Architect, Hargrave, R. No other personnel." Just him and Rita.
Second, vulnerability. "Arrival: Private airfield, Liechtenstein. Civilian attire. No body armor. No weaponry-overt or covert. No communications gear. No technical equipment." The comms prohibition was sinister, severing them from Static's overwatch, ensuring mental isolation. "You will submit to full physical, electronic, and bio-resonant search. Any deviation results in immediate termination of summit and activation of Protocol Blackwatch." Their death sentence.
Third, control. "Transportation from airfield will be provided. Final summit location will not be disclosed." Blind.
The final condition was brutal. "Contingency: The remainder of Styx Squad, including asset Jenkins, will be relocated to designated SHEPARD holding facility in Geneva for summit duration. They will be under 'operational observation'." Hostages. Their lives were collateral for his behavior.
He gathered the team, projected the protocol onto the wall. Green, blocky text listing their chains.
Breaker slammed his fist onto the table, cracking the wood. "It's a goddamn execution! They're gonna strip you and put you on a plane to nowhere! We can't let you do this, Arthur! Suicide!"
"He's right." Ricochet agreed. "This is an ambush dressed as business. We go with you, or you don't go."
Even Lancet's icy composure cracked. "Risk analysis is unacceptable, Architect. Probability of hostile action against you and Rita approaches ninety percent."
Hawke let their fierce, protective loyalty wash over him. "Listen." His voice sharp, absolute. "Every word you're saying is tactically sound. And that's precisely why we do this. This isn't testing our combat skill. It's testing my commitment to negotiation."
He looked at each of them. "Klein knows we're dangerous. If we show up armed, it proves we only think in violence. Accepting these terms sends a message: we're not here to fight. We're here to talk. We're willing to play his game, his rules. Necessary good faith."
He took a breath. "Our real weapon isn't a gun. It's the Devil's Ledger. The data dump is automated. If I don't enter a specific passcode every twenty-four hours, the entire archive releases automatically-to the press, to governments, to every intelligence agency on the planet. That's why Klein can't just kill us. The gun is already pointed at his head, and only I can lower it."
Breaker's eyes widened. "Wait. So if we're all locked up in Geneva-"
"The timer keeps running," Hawke confirmed. "Klein knows this. It's the only leverage that matters. Jenkins is alive, the switch is active, and killing us doesn't solve Klein's problem-it guarantees his destruction."
"But you're right," he continued. "We prepare for the worst." He faced Breaker. "Cole, if Rita and I miss our check-in window-if something goes wrong and I can't reset the timer-you assume the system has failed. Initiate Protocol Ghost. Aisha," he looked to Static, "you'll have bypassed Geneva holding facility security by then. You and Javi extract Jenkins. Take him to the final safe house in Iceland."
He paused. "And you activate the parting gift. The pre-recorded data packet implicating Cromwell personally in the Medved cover-up. Send it directly to his superiors. Throws SHEPARD into chaos, gives you the window to disappear for good."
Ricochet crossed his arms. "And what if Klein just decides to lock you in a black site forever? Keep you alive but unreachable? You'd still have to keep entering that code, or the world burns."
"Then I enter it," Hawke said simply. "For as long as it takes. But Klein's too efficient for that. A permanent hostage situation wastes resources, creates instability. He'll want this resolved."
"You're gambling our lives on that efficiency," Breaker said, voice low and dangerous.
"I am." Hawke didn't look away. "I'm placing all of our lives in Klein's hands to prove a point about order versus chaos. It's a calculated risk, but it's the only move that gets us to the table as equals rather than insurgents to be eliminated."
The room fell silent. Static's jaw worked. Ricochet stared at the ceiling. Lancet's fingers drummed once against his thigh.
Finally, Breaker exhaled. "You're asking us to sit in a cage and trust a god not to crush us."
"I'm asking you to trust that I can make that god see reason," Hawke said. "Or at least, see efficiency."
Breaker held his gaze for a long moment, then gave a single, sharp nod. The rest of the team followed, one by one. The furious objections died, replaced by grim acceptance. They saw the cold logic of his gambit. He was betting everything on this conversation.
He looked at Rita. Silent, her calm presence steadying. She simply nodded. Ready.
They were in this together. Until the end.
***
Summit morning arrived with quiet, unnerving stillness. The Tuscan sky was brilliant, cloudless blue. They dressed in simple, anonymous civilian clothes-dark trousers, nondescript shirts, soft-soled shoes. To Rita, the clothes felt like a shroud. Shedding their operational identities, their armor.
The goodbyes happened on a winding country road. The rest of Styx Squad stood by a nondescript van-their transport to Geneva holding facility. Their new prison. The mood heavy with unspoken fears.
Breaker pulled Arthur into a bone-crushing hug. "You come back." A growl, an order, vibrating against Arthur's chest.
Ricochet gave a sharp, meaningful nod, usual glibness replaced by fierce loyalty. Static, eyes red-rimmed but resolute, handed Arthur a small, inert data chip. "Protocol Ghost is armed. Just… try not to make us use it."
Lancet was last. "Your logic is sound, Architect. But logic has little defense against a man who doesn't abide by its rules. Be careful."
They were gone. Arthur and Rita alone. The drive to the private airfield in Liechtenstein was a bubble of focused tension. Rita felt Arthur's mind-a fortress of calm, disciplined thought, running strategies. But beneath his control, she felt hairline cracks of fear. He was an architect of action, of physical certainty. This world of abstract power, psychological warfare, was alien territory.
The airfield was a study in discreet wealth. Waiting on the tarmac: a sleek, unmarked black business jet. No call signs, no national insignia. A ghost aircraft, belonging to the man who owned everything.
As they approached, four individuals in impeccably tailored dark suits moved to intercept. Rita felt their psychic hum-chilling, harmonious resonance, a complete lack of individual static. Their minds weren't their own, wills entirely subsumed. Living puppets. Beautiful and terrifying.
The lead puppet, a man with a handsome, empty face, stopped before them. "Mr. Hawke, Ms. Hargrave." His voice smooth, emotionless. "We are ready for you."
What followed was a silent, impersonal, and deeply violating search. They were scanned with humming devices, bodies expertly patted down. The puppets moved with unnerving efficiency, their presence a psychic void. Rita actively shielded her mind, focusing on the tarmac, mountain air, anything to avoid the sensation-like standing at the edge of a cliff in total darkness, the absence of ground beneath her feet, a cold pressure building behind her eyes. The wrongness of their synchronized consciousness pressed against her shields like freezing water seeking cracks. A world without souls.
Finally, the lead puppet nodded. Satisfied. "You are clean." He gestured toward the jet. "This way, please."
The long walk was over. They'd passed the first test, surrendering weapons, armor, autonomy. Now they would step into the gilded cage itself.
Hawke stepped up the ramp, Rita a silent, steady presence beside him. The interior shocked-a flying boardroom of breathtaking, sterile luxury. Polished dark wood, plush cream leather, brushed steel. The epitome of corporate power, designed to intimidate. Yet for all its opulence, the cabin felt sterile, lifeless. A beautiful, perfectly preserved tomb. No visible pilots or crew. Entirely automated.
The heavy ramp hissed shut behind them. Sealed. The world vanished. They were completely in Klein's domain. The jet began moving, engines an almost silent hum, technology beyond most military sectors. The windows were polarized. Opaque. Flying blind, rocketing toward an unknown destination.
He and Rita took seats opposite each other. The silence: absolute. Hawke ran through his strategy one last time. He felt like a duelist about to face a master, armed only with a single, untried blade. He had to be perfect.
A screen on the forward bulkhead flickered to life. The calm, smiling, infinitely punchable face of Analyst Zeigler.
"Director Cromwell sends his regards." Zeigler's smooth, insidious voice filled the cabin. "He is confident you will find this summit… illuminating." The smile widened, predatory and knowing. "He trusts you will comport yourselves with the gravity the situation demands. Please enjoy the flight."
The screen went blank. A final parting shot from Cromwell. I am watching. I am waiting. Fail, and I will bury you.
Hawke ignored the impotent threat. Cromwell was yesterday's battle. The war was ahead. He looked across at Rita. Her face calm, hands in her lap, focus immense. She was his anchor, his counsel, the keeper of their shared conscience. In this sterile, luxurious cage, her presence was the only thing that felt real.
He was unarmed, unarmored, flying into the heart of a psychic tyrant's empire. His entire team was hostage. He had never been more vulnerable. The sheer audacity of his plan threatened to overwhelm him.
He met Rita's calm, steady gaze, and in her eyes found not fear, but a reflection of his own defiant resolve. They shared a single, silent nod. A reaffirmation of their pact.
The long walk was over.
The chapter of their lives as SHEPARD operatives was finished. A new, far more dangerous one was about to begin.
***
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