The Omission Index, Ch 18: The Gilded Cage Pt. 3
The SHEPARD team infiltrates a gala to trap a telepath. Hale battles De Vries's mind control to shatter the illusion and free his victims.
SERIALIZED FICTIONTHE OMISSION INDEX
12/15/202510 min read


The labyrinthine financials, the whispers of undue influence, the chilling psychic imprints - every thread led to a single glittering target: Señor Alvaro Herrera's charity gala. An opulent trap the SHEPARD team intended to spring.
The invitations arrived on thick cream card stock, each embossed with a stylized golden sunburst. Aliento Dorado's logo. Hale noted it with grim satisfaction. The engraved script promised "An Evening of Philanthropic Splendor" at Herrera's Hacienda Aliento Dorado, perched in the hills overlooking Oaxaca City.
The timing was deliberate. Arthur Finch, the British venture capitalist Lucian de Vries had been grooming for months, was scheduled to announce a "transformative pledge" during the gala's main auction. Reid's intercepted communications confirmed it. This was de Vries's crowning achievement. His image as Oaxaca's premier benefactor would cement itself. Another fortune would vanish into hidden accounts. The Telepath's moment of triumph. His most vulnerable point.
The SHEPARD team gathered in the cramped back room of their commandeered "Import/Export" office. Stale coffee and the metallic tang of anxiety thickened the air. Less than twenty-four hours until the gala.
"This is our shot." Hale tapped the glossy invitation lying on the makeshift table. His voice was low, emotionless. "He'll have multiple targets there - Finch, Schweppes, probably von Kessler, maybe others currently under his control. He'll be actively maintaining influence over all of them, especially Finch, leading up to the announcement. That means his mental defenses will be spread thinner, however skilled he is. Concentration divided."
"Getting in will be challenging." Knopff studied the satellite images Reid had pulled up. "Walled compound. Single access road. Private security."
"Our covers get us through," Kwan said. "Reid, you managed the guest list?"
Reid grinned, a flash of his usual bold confidence. "'Mr. and Mrs. Thomas Hale, respected collectors of pre-Columbian art' - you and me, Hale. Try to look like you own something besides government-issue slacks. 'Mr. Ezra Kwan, renowned ethnomusicologist' - that's you, Shep. Keep the healing subtle. 'Mr. Gregor Knopff, security consultant to Mr. Hale' - you just get to be yourself, lucky bastard. Blend right in with the hired muscle." He winked. "Got us four real, gold-embossed invitations. The trick is getting our gear past their security at the door."
"Minimal gear," Hale decided. "Kwan, you focus on victim support. When their conditioning breaks, they'll be disoriented. Terrified. You manage the immediate fallout, prevent panic, guide them clear. Reid, you're our eyes and ears. Disrupt their network. Create static. Knopff, you're extraction and deterrent. If de Vries or his security get physical, you shut them down."
He met each pair of eyes in turn. "My role is direct mental engagement with de Vries. I need to get close to him, find a chance when he's focused on Finch, and then I hit him. A direct assault is too risky. He's too strong. My approach will be to create mental noise. Feedback. I project the raw, unfiltered anxieties of his victims back at him. The truth of their financial ruin. The grief of their families. Introduce doubt, confusion, shatter the carefully built illusions in his mind and in the minds of those he's controlling. If I can disrupt his concentration enough, break his hold even for a few moments, it might be enough to trigger complete failure in his influence."
"And if he detects you first?" Kwan's concern bled through.
"He will, eventually. The moment I engage, he'll know. That's when you all move. Knopff, your target is de Vries. Reid, deploy countermeasures if he tries wide-scale broadcasts. Kwan, prioritize the victims."
The plan was ragged with uncertainties. They were walking into the Telepath's domain. Their only workable option. Waiting for de Vries to make a mistake could take years. More lives consumed. Tonight, they would force his hand. Spring the trap. Pray they were left standing.
***
The Hacienda Aliento Dorado glittered beneath Oaxacan stars. Soft lights traced the courtyard paths. Night-blooming jasmine saturated the air, cloying and sweet. Waiters in crisp uniforms circulated with champagne flutes and exquisite canapés. A string quartet played discreetly near a fountain draped in flowering vines. Wealthy, self-important voices murmured and laughed. Hale moved through the elegantly dressed guests. A perfect illusion of sophisticated charity.
He, Kwan, and Knopff had navigated the tight security. Their forged invitations passed inspection. Reid had arrived early with the catering staff, gear concealed in a food service cart. Hale, as the 'art collector,' feigned interest in sculptures and paintings throughout the hacienda - all recently acquired from de Vries's "grateful" benefactors. Kwan engaged local dignitaries in conversation, his charm effortless. Knopff, brooding and silent in a dark suit, looked intimidating. Precisely his role.
Hale's mental senses were on high alert. The air was thick with sickeningly sweet, artificial joy. De Vries's projection, a shimmering mental blanket designed to soothe, disarm, make everyone blissfully content. Beneath it, individual threads of control connected de Vries to his targets: Tina Schweppes, radiant yet hollow-eyed, holding court near a fountain; Baron von Kessler, nodding serenely over his champagne, gaze distant; Arthur Finch, standing beside de Vries near a small platform, nervous yet filled with prophet-like passion.
Lucian de Vries, as Señor Alvaro Herrera, was in his element. He moved through the crowd with effortless grace. His voice a warm murmur. Dark eyes sparkling with intelligence and spiritual depth. The sun around which lesser planets revolved. Hale tracked the constant mental signals, a low-frequency broadcast of contentment, purpose, unwavering belief. Masterful. Insidious.
The moment arrived. De Vries stepped onto the platform. Silence rippled through the guests. Arthur Finch stood beside him, pale yet resolute, papers clutched in trembling hands.
"My dear friends, benefactors, seekers of truth." De Vries's voice could melt glaciers. "Tonight, we celebrate transformation. The courage to embrace higher purpose..."
As de Vries continued his introduction, Hale moved. Slowly. Deliberately. He positioned himself within clear mental range, shields raised yet prepared for engagement. Kwan shifted closer to Tina Schweppes. Knopff was a statue near the archway, gaze fixed on de Vries, body coiled.
De Vries gestured toward Finch. "Tonight, we witness such vision in my dear friend, Mr. Arthur Finch!"
Finch stepped forward, hand trembling. "Señor Herrera... friends... it is with profound destiny that I announce my intention to pledge the entirety of Finch Global Holdings to the Herrera Foundation..."
Now.
Hale focused, gathering the raw, painful mental echoes from Tina Schweppes's looted living room, from Baron von Kessler's empty library, from Professor Ehrlich's terrified mind. He began to broadcast. Project those clashing truths back into the shimmering field of contentment.
He pushed the image of Tina's housekeeper, Inez, face etched with helpless grief. He sent the echo of von Kessler's estranged son, voice cracking with anger over being disinherited. He projected Finch's deep-seated fear of dying alone and forgotten, the fear de Vries had manipulated, stripped now of charitable grandeur, leaving only raw anxiety. He layered these with cold reality: Aliento Dorado S.A., sterile offshore account numbers, the hollow charitable facade. Mental static. Unwelcome truths aimed at constructed illusions.
De Vries flinched. Tiny reaction. His mental field tightened as interference registered. The flow of projected kindness faltered. Arthur Finch, mid-sentence, stumbled. Deep confusion clouded his features. He blinked. His eyes lost their gleam, replaced by doubt.
Tina Schweppes gasped across the courtyard. Her hand flew to her chest. Her smile wavered. Baron von Kessler frowned. A deep line appeared between his brows.
For a split second, de Vries's eyes went flat and still, all warmth extinguished as he scanned the crowd. His control, spread across multiple individuals, was straining.
Hale pressed his advantage, amplifying the mental noise. He focused on Finch now, projecting stark reality: signing those papers meant the loss of his company, the bewilderment of his employees, the ruin of his tangible legacy.
Finch stopped speaking altogether. He stared at the papers as if seeing them for the first time. His face paled. Dawning horror replaced earlier passion. "I... I... what is this?" he stammered, looking around in panic.
De Vries's composure cracked. Visible sweat appeared on his upper lip. He tried to reassert mental dominance. Hale met it with a counter-current of raw truth.
Tina Schweppes swayed, eyes wide with fear and comprehension. Other guests looked around in confusion. Blissful smiles replaced by anxious frowns.
The string quartet faltered. Music died in a jarring squawk.
Knopff began to move. Silent advance toward the platform. Reid's voice crackled in Hale's ear. "Comms blackout initiated. Security net is down. Go time."
De Vries knew he was losing control. His eyes locked onto Hale's. Hale saw a feral thing brought to bay. Control shattering. Power turned back on him.
***
The delicate web of contentment Lucian had woven tore apart. One moment, he was conducting a symphony of adoration. The next, raw emotions slammed into him - fear, doubt, confusion. Someone had thrown open curtains in a darkened room. Everything harsh, unforgiving.
The threads. Snapping. One by one. Falling.
Finch, face a mask of horror, stared at the donation papers. Tina Schweppes clutched her head, eyes wide with terror no longer his. Others murmured, shifted. Blissful certainty dissolving.
The source of this sabotage - Lucian's gaze sliced through the crowd and locked onto a man standing near the courtyard's edge. Plain in a well-cut suit. The sheer intensity of mental interference was staggering. A professional. A rival. Someone systematically dismantling his life's work.
For a horrifying instant, Lucian felt pure panic, an emotion he had locked away for decades. He tried to reassert dominance, project calm confidence, kind wisdom. The saboteur met his push with a stronger current. A flood of stark truths - images of Inez's grief, cold account numbers, the emptiness of his victims' futures. Raw facts tearing through his stories.
His constructed world - the hacienda built on stolen dreams, the adoring followers, the very persona of Señor Alvaro Herrera - was crumbling. Dissolving like sugar skulls in rain. The wealth, the art, the power - none of it offered comfort now.
A large, brutally solid figure moved toward him. Purpose in heavy steps. This one had the cold eyes of a government agent. Lucian felt a flicker of disdain - these crude enforcers. The disdain was swallowed by rising dread.
His mental abilities, once his greatest strength, now felt like a curse. They offered no escape. Only a horrifyingly clear view of his own unraveling. He felt the threads snapping as his victims began to awaken, to question, to feel the raw reality. Their horror, their confusion, their rage - it all washed back over him, a tidal wave he could no longer push away.
He saw his reflection in a polished silver tray dropped by a startled waiter - a pale, drawn face, eyes wide with terror he had spent his life building this place to escape. Now it was swallowing him whole.
The big man was almost upon him. Knopff, he registered distantly. His true power lay in subtle manipulation. That power was broken, useless.
As cold steel restraints closed around his wrists, Lucian de Vries felt a profound hollowing. The stolen wealth, the art, the power - none of it had ever truly been his. It had all been performance. A desperate act to mask the hollowness within.
Unmasked, he was left with nothing else. Back in the gilded cage. He had built it himself.
***
The grand living room, hours later, was quiet chaos. The glittering guests were gone, replaced by somber SHEPARD personnel and a few bewildered local police. Knopff oversaw the cataloging of de Vries's ill-gotten gains - an astonishing collection of art and financial papers Reid was already tracing through a maze of accounts. Hale, utterly drained, sat quietly in a corner. The mental toll was immense.
Kwan moved through the rooms, focused on the victims. Tina Schweppes huddled in an armchair, wrapped in a cashmere shawl. Her manic brightness was gone, replaced by fragile confusion. She kept asking for Señor Herrera, voice small and lost, unable to match the kind spiritual guide she had adored with the cold predator SHEPARD described. Her reality had shattered.
Arthur Finch was a different wreck. His bluff exterior had crumbled. He paced the library, cursing de Vries and himself, voice thick with rage and shame. "He played me like a bloody fiddle! Made me believe I was a savior! And all along, he was bleeding me dry!" Finch was raging at the humiliation. His pride, scraped raw.
Kwan spoke with them and the handful of other victims. His voice was calm, his presence a steady anchor. He offered no easy answers. He listened. He validated their feelings of betrayal. He explained, as gently as possible, the nature of de Vries's manipulation. Like explaining color to someone born blind.
He observed Hale conferring with Agent Laskell, SHEPARD's field supervisor. They were discussing protocols for witness management, asset recovery, the story that would be fed to authorities. A sophisticated fraud ring, Laskell suggested. No mention of mental abilities. The truth, as always, would be sanitized, contained, buried beneath plausible deniability.
As Knopff pushed Lucian de Vries past Hale, de Vries stopped. A desperate look in his eyes.
"You have no idea what you destroyed," he whispered, voice hoarse. "It was beautiful. The wealth, the power, the adoration. I gave them such peace. And you, with your cold truths, took it all away. What are they without my gift? What are they now?"
Hale looked at him. His gaze was filled with weary pity.
"Alive," he said softly. "They are alive. No longer yours."
Kwan felt a flicker of pity, quickly suppressed. De Vries was a predator. His actions monstrous. The emptiness at his core, the endless greed born of a deep void - it was a uniquely human, if terribly twisted, tragedy.
As dawn broke, painting the Oaxacan sky in soft rose and pale gold, the SHEPARD operation began to wind down. The hacienda, once a symbol of stolen luxury, now felt like a tomb.
Later, still dressed to their nines, Hale and Kwan found a quiet cafe near the Zocalo.
"Well, it was an interesting evening," Kwan said lightly.
"Already missing that expensive wine?"
Hale smiled. The expression was a thin veneer over the exhaustion that hollowed his gaze. Kwan recognized the look - the slight tension in the shoulders, the strain around the mouth.
"We should take a couple of days," he said, voice carefully casual. "Get out of town. Maybe go back to the beach, do some hiking. Or there's a museum here I've heard is very good."
Hale raised an eyebrow. "What, you get bored of the work?"
"I know you're deflecting. I enjoy the work. We will be no good if we burn ourselves out."
Hale nodded, gaze distant.
"We will be no good if one of us burns out," Kwan added quietly.
Hale's gaze flickered, a spark of awareness. He argued anyway.
"Alright, maybe a day or two," he said finally. "Then we get back to the hunt."
They sat silent, sipping their coffees. Above them, the sky slowly brightened. A few brave birds began to sing.
"So, the beach, then?" Kwan said finally. This time Hale's smile was genuine, his eyes softening.
"Sounds good."
***
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