The Omission Index, Ch 17: The Gilded Cage Pt. 2
In Oaxaca, the team battles a telepath who turns desires into cages. A rescue attempt reveals the enemy's control is stronger than they feared.
SERIALIZED FICTIONTHE OMISSION INDEX
12/1/202512 min read


Oaxaca presented sun-drenched streets and vibrant markets to tourists. Hale knew better. He was stepping into something darker - a landscape of manipulation wrapped in philanthropy.
The first interview had been unsettling enough. Tina Schweppes radiated aggressive happiness while Kwan asked his careful questions. Now she'd "graciously" agreed to let Hale have a "moment of quiet thought" in her living room. She'd retreated to the library with Señor Herrera for "Foundation matters." The ever-present Señor Herrera.
Hale had his chance.
He stood in the room's center. Hothouse lilies choked the air. Beeswax polish made everything gleam. Sunlight poured through tall arched windows, lighting priceless tapestries and pre-Columbian artifacts - artifacts Tina was happily giving away. The room whispered of generations, wealth, power, taste. Something else pulsed beneath it all. Something that set Hale's teeth on edge.
He closed his eyes. Extended his senses. Pushed past surface layers - history, luxury, old money - searching for recent imprints. Dominant ones.
Tina's aura had struck him wrong during their meeting. Blinding brightness masking hollowness. Manic joy concealing emptiness. A stage set painted beautiful but built on nothing.
Here, in her home's heart, the Telepath's influence suffocated everything. A constant hum just beneath hearing. Gentle. Persistent. Nudging certain thoughts louder while silencing others.
Echoes washed over him. Tina's fear of irrelevance - thin, sharp - now amplified to a roar. Her vague wish for meaning twisted into desperate need. And beneath it all, her legendary skepticism lay dormant. A cold ember wrapped in false peace.
Tina was a willing inmate. Ecstatic, even. No fear lingered in her mental residue. No sense of force. Just that strange hollow joy. The desperate happiness of someone convinced they'd chosen their own salvation.
Hale ran a gloved hand across cool marble. Foundation brochures lay stacked there, featuring Señor Herrera's saintly smile. The mental imprint burned strong. Herrera projected deep wisdom. Unshakeable calm. An invitation. A promise that giving away everything felt like ultimate fulfillment.
He shared his findings back at the team's rented house. Oaxacan night pulsed outside - distant music, laughter, life. "He's not controlling thoughts," Hale said. His voice stayed low. A frown carved his face. "He's conducting. He finds their fears, their hopes. Turns up the volume on some. Silences others. Rewrites their emotional score. They want to give him everything. They think it's their idea."
Kwan's jaw tightened. His hands clenched into fists. "So breaking that hold... it's not about exposing a con man. We have to make them see their own desires turned into weapons."
"Exactly," Hale agreed. "And that's the hardest part. How do you convince someone their most profound truth is actually a lie?"
***
Meanwhile, across the city in its most exclusive quarter, Lucian de Vries - disguised as the impeccably tailored Señor Alvaro Herrera - studied Arthur Finch across a linen-draped table. Oaxaca's most exclusive rooftop restaurant. City lights pulsed below in a glittering web. The air carried damiana and expensive cigars.
Finch projected stubborn British practicality to the world. Lucian sensed something else beneath. Hooks already set. Irreversible.
The groundwork had been meticulous. A "chance" meeting at a private viewing of Zapotec artifacts. Lucian displaying his deep knowledge of pre-Columbian beliefs. Another accidental encounter at a polo match. There, Lucian had amplified Finch's hidden boredom with shallow expatriate chatter while projecting quiet intellectual depth.
Tonight was about reeling him in.
"One does reach a certain level, wouldn't you agree, Arthur?" Lucian swirled blood-red Rioja. His gaze turned thoughtful. Almost sad. "A point where collecting things no longer satisfies. Where one questions the permanence of one's achievements."
Currents swirled around Finch. Ripe. Ready. The stale metallic tang of mortality. Hollow ache of a life measured in stock prices. Desperate, unvoiced yearning for legacy beyond boardrooms.
Finch had been loudly recounting a corporate victory. He paused. His usual bluster dissolved. Shoulders sagged. He set down his wine glass with uncharacteristic hesitation. "Well, yes, Herrera. Some truth in that. One can't take it with one, as they say." Something flickered across his features - unease? Regret?
Lucian allowed sympathetic silence. Then he leaned forward. His voice dropped. Confidential. Almost conspiratorial. "But what if one could, Arthur? Not the material things, of course. But the essence. The impact. What if one could create something truly lasting? Something that would benefit generations while resonating with deeper spiritual purpose within oneself now?"
He amplified Finch's budding desire for meaning. Painted vivid mental pictures - not through direct suggestion, but through carefully chosen words, evocative images, gentle telepathic nudging of Finch's own imagination. He spoke of poor indigenous communities in remote Oaxacan mountains. Ancient crafts dying. Children lacking education. Connection to sacred earth threatened by modern life.
He conjured images of Finch transformed. Not a ruthless businessman but a kind patron. A visionary savior. Using considerable resources to build something transformative - sustainable farming projects, schools honoring traditional wisdom, artisan groups bringing prosperity while preserving cultural heritage.
"Imagine, Arthur," Lucian said. His eyes shone with manufactured passion that Finch's longing would interpret as genuine inspiration. "Not just another successful venture, but a living testament. A legacy woven into this ancient, sacred land's fabric. The 'Arthur Finch Initiative for Oaxacan Renewal.' Has a certain ring to it, don't you think?"
Finch stayed silent. Staring at glittering city lights below. His commanding posture melted into something thoughtful. Almost wistful. Internal landscape shifting. Cynical, hardened walls fissuring. Giving way to intoxicating visions of a new, heroic self.
"It would require substantial money, Herrera," Finch said finally. His voice hoarse. "Significant commitment."
Lucian smiled. Serene. Understanding. "Greatness always does, Arthur. True legacies aren't built on half-hearted efforts." He didn't press. Didn't need to. Finch's emotional architecture was transforming before his eyes. Carefully constructed defenses crumbling beneath the weight of this new, meaningful identity. The subtle mental current Lucian maintained - warm, encouraging flow of amplified aspiration and diminished doubt - did its work.
He raised his glass. "To new beginnings, Arthur. And to the courage to embrace a grander purpose."
Finch hesitated. Then raised his own glass. New, unfamiliar light dawned in his eyes. "To a grander purpose," he echoed. The words tasted strange on his tongue. Undeniably appealing.
Lucian de Vries hid his internal smile. The seduction proceeded perfectly. Another cage being constructed. Its bars forged from Arthur Finch's own noblest, most deeply buried desires. Soon, another magnificent fortune would flow willingly into Aliento Dorado's receptive embrace.
The game was, as always, exquisitely satisfying.
***
Several blocks away, Reid fought a different war. Oaxaca was a goddamn sauna. The air conditioning in their cramped "Import/Export" office felt like a sick dog panting on ice. Reid hunched over his humming portable computer. Screen glow reflected in caffeine-wired eyes. A half-eaten tlayuda went cold beside him.
While Hale played mental detective in Tina Schweppes's fancy tomb and Kwan did his sympathetic routine with grieving relatives, Reid was doing real work. Following the money. Because money didn't lie. Much.
Knopff sat nearby. A mountain of silent disapproval. He cleaned a frighteningly large Bowie knife with slow, careful intensity that made their local contact - a jumpy kid named Sandoval - visibly sweat. Knopff wasn't much for digital detective work. But he excelled at shaking down unwilling informants in Oaxacan bars and providing unignorable physical presence when Reid needed to "encourage" cooperation from unhelpful bank managers.
"Anything yet, Sparky?" Knopff rumbled, not looking up from his knife.
"Patience, caveman," Reid snapped. Fingers flying across keys. "Untangling this shell corporation network is like mapping a river of ghosts. Every channel vanishes into the next."
Initial financial trails from Tina Schweppes, Baron von Kessler, and soon-to-be-robbed Arthur Finch were all designed to look legal. Complicated international charitable investments. Money flowed from personal accounts in Oaxaca to newly created foundations with impressively kind names - The Herrera Foundation, The Global Harmony Initiative, The Institute for Esoteric Studies. From there, dizzying series of wire transfers, often split into smaller amounts, harder to trace, through banks in Panama, Lichtenstein, the Cayman Islands. All the usual places for hiding money.
But Reid's custom tracking programs, running on SHEPARD's powerful portable mainframe - disguised unconvincingly as oversized stereo speakers - were finding patterns. He wasn't just following declared destinations. He was looking for echoes. Subtle electronic handshakes. Repeating IP addresses. Digital fingerprints even skilled money launderers sometimes overlooked.
"Okay, got a connection," Reid muttered, leaning closer to the screen. "The 'Herrera Foundation' and Finch's new pet project, the 'Oaxacan Renewal Initiative' he's about to dump his savings into... both send large percentages through a holding company in Curaçao called 'Seraphim Investments'." Quick cross-check. "And what do you know? Seraphim Investments also received big wire transfers from Baron von Kessler's 'Esoteric Studies' slush fund three months back. Different names, different missions, same goddamn back alley."
He dug deeper. Peeling back layers of fake directors and anonymous owners. Seraphim Investments moved its funds - along with money from at least three other similar "charitable" fronts he'd uncovered that morning - into a larger, more hidden company registered in Luxembourg: Aliento Dorado S.A. Golden Breath. That name again. The one that had caught his attention back in Oregon. Central hub. Black hole where all this "charitable" money disappeared.
"Our boy 'Herrera,' or whatever his real name is, isn't just a smooth-talking con man," Reid said. Reluctant respect crept into his voice. "He's a goddamn financial octopus. Tentacles everywhere." He ran a trace on Aliento Dorado's known signers. Blank walls. Proxies. Ghosts.
Then he got a hit on something else. Something SHEPARD's more unusual sensors were designed to detect. During his sweep of Tina Schweppes's villa earlier - while Hale did his mental magic - Reid had discreetly planted micro-sensors. Designed to detect unusual energy patterns and data transmissions. One of them, tucked behind a heavy mirror in Tina's study, was now pinging.
"Well, well, well," Reid murmured. Slow, predatory grin spreading across his face. "Looks like our Señor Herrera isn't just relying on his silver tongue." The sensor picked up faint, highly encrypted, pulsed data bursts coming from within the Schweppes villa. Specifically from near Tina's personal computer and telephone lines. Too irregular for normal communications. Too targeted. "He's left electronic breadcrumbs. Or maybe mental ones. The energy signature around these bursts is weird. Not purely technological. It's got a faint bio-luminescent tag. Almost like a mental watermark being put on data streams."
Hale had mentioned the Telepath's ability to nudge thoughts, amplify desires. What if he was also influencing their understanding of information? Or "tagging" their communications to watch for outside interference? Signs of rebellion? It would explain his tight control. How he seemed to predict and counter any flicker of doubt in his victims.
"Knopff," Reid said, already pulling up new diagnostic tools. "I think our ghost just accidentally showed us one of his strings. And I'm about to give it a good, hard yank." He began to work. Focused intensity in his eyes. The challenge of unraveling this complex, high-tech, possibly mental web of deceit was far more exciting than any amount of Oaxacan sunshine.
The money was the key. And the money, Reid knew, always left a trail. Even if written in invisible, mental ink.
***
While Reid hunted digital ghosts and Lucian wove his web of seduction, Kwan pursued a more personal lead. Oaxacan air felt heavy, oppressive as he sat in a shaded courtyard of a small family-run café, sipping lukewarm horchata. Waiting for a call. A signal from one of the local contacts Lynn - their logistics chief back in Appalachia - had discreetly arranged. A distant cousin who worked as a caregiver for one of the expatriate community's less famous but still significantly wealthy elderly residents.
This particular resident - a retired German academic named Professor Ehrlich - had, according to Reid's financial traces, made increasingly large and uncharacteristic "donations" to the "Institute for Esoteric Studies" six months earlier. His family in Germany had been ignored. Then cut off completely. Ehrlich, like Tina Schweppes and the Baron, had found "true enlightenment."
But Lynn's cousin had reported something new. Professor Ehrlich, usually so calm, so devoted to his "studies" under the Institute's guidance - which seemed to mostly involve him signing checks - had been agitated. Forgetful, yes. That was ongoing. But now there were moments of clear confusion. Flashes of anger. Muttered questions about his finances. About where his beloved collection of rare books had gone.
He'd even, according to the caregiver, asked about his estranged daughter in Berlin. Something he hadn't done in months. As if the Telepath's seamless influence was fraying at the edges. Mental signal weakening. Perhaps, Kwan hoped, Ehrlich's usefulness as a source of funds was nearing its end. The Telepath's mental grip loosening. Attention focused on newer, richer targets like Arthur Finch.
The call came. Professor Ehrlich was alone for the next hour. His usual "Institute liaison" was unexpectedly called away. A small window. Their best chance.
Kwan met Hale at the pre-arranged spot. They drove to Ehrlich's modest but elegant villa on the city's outskirts. The housekeeper - a stout Zapotec woman whose eyes held deep sadness - let them in with a silent nod. Clearly helping with this secret visit.
They found Professor Ehrlich in his sun-drenched library. Surrounded by empty shelves where treasured books had once been. An old man. Frail and bird-like. But his eyes, when he looked up, held a spark of sharp intelligence mixed with deep, bewildered pain.
"Professor Ehrlich," Kwan began gently, introducing himself and Hale as "financial consultants" worried about recent irregularities. Thin excuse. Best they could do without revealing SHEPARD's true nature.
Kwan settled into the chair across from Ehrlich. Leaning forward with genuine concern. He'd spent years perfecting this approach. Not practiced sympathy of a counselor. Something deeper. The art of truly seeing someone. Recognizing their pain. Meeting it without judgment.
"Professor," Kwan said. His voice soft but unwavering. "I can see this is difficult. These empty shelves... these were your life's work, weren't they?"
Something shifted in Ehrlich's eyes. The glazed contentment flickered. Like a candle flame disturbed by wind.
"My books," Ehrlich whispered. His voice suddenly smaller. More fragile. "My first editions... I had a Copernicus... fifteenth century..." His hands trembled as he reached toward empty shelves.
Kwan nodded. His own expression reflecting the old man's loss. "It must have meant everything to you. A lifetime of careful collecting. Of scholarship. Tell me about your favorite piece - the one that brought you the most joy."
The question was deliberately personal. Designed to cut through the telepath's overlay. Reach the authentic core of who Ehrlich had been. Hale watched in fascination as Kwan's empathetic presence seemed to create a psychic safe space. A moment where Ehrlich's true self could surface.
"The Gutenberg fragments," Ehrlich said. His voice growing stronger. More focused. "I found them in a monastery outside Prague, 1978. The monks didn't know what they had..." His eyes sharpened. Scholarly passion breaking through mental fog. "Wait... where are they? I would never... I could never have given them away. They were for the university. For my research..."
The breakthrough was happening. Not through psychic force. Through simple power of human connection. Of being truly heard and understood. Kwan's approach had found the thread of Ehrlich's authentic self. Was gently pulling it to the surface.
"Professor, can you tell us about El Maestro? About the Institute? When did you first decide to support their work?" Kwan asked. His voice still gentle but now with an edge of urgency.
Ehrlich's eyes widened with dawning, terrible realization. "El Maestro... he said they were being preserved... for the Institute... but I never... I wouldn't have..." The old man's face crumpled. "What have I done? My daughter... she tried to call... I hung up on her. Why did I hang up on Greta?"
Hale felt a surge of cautious hope. Kwan's empathetic breakthrough was working. The old man was fighting his way back to clarity. To his authentic self.
Then, it happened.
Ehrlich's eyes unfocused. The spark of clarity vanished. Replaced by glazed, almost saintly calm. A serene smile spread across his face. The struggle in his aura stopped. The Telepath's familiar, oppressive mental signature reasserted itself with smooth, almost casual dominance. Hale felt it like a physical blow. De Vries, from wherever he was, had sensed the interference. The challenge to his control. And with a flick of his mental wrist, had snuffed out Ehrlich's brief rebellion.
"El Maestro?" Professor Ehrlich said. His voice once again filled with that strange, hollow joy. "He is a visionary, gentlemen. A true spiritual guide. The Institute... it is doing such important work. Unlocking the ancient secrets of the cosmos." He beamed at them. "And my books, my little earthly treasures? They are serving a far greater purpose now. Contributing to the enlightenment of all mankind. I have never been happier. Never felt more fulfilled." He stood. His earlier frailty gone. Replaced by almost unnatural energy. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a meditation session scheduled. El Maestro has taught me such wonderful techniques for achieving inner peace."
He turned and walked - almost gliding - from the room. Left Hale and Kwan standing in the sun-drenched library. Surrounded by ghosts of stolen books. Chilling, undeniable proof of the Telepath's far-reaching power.
Kwan let out a slow, heavy breath. His hands clenched into fists at his sides. "He was right there, Tom. We had him. For just a moment, he remembered who he really was."
Hale looked around the room. At empty shelves. Expensive furniture that no longer belonged to the man who lived here. De Vries didn't just steal fortunes. He hollowed out souls. Left behind smiling, beautiful husks.
The attempted intervention had failed spectacularly. But it had also proven something important. Kwan's empathetic approach could pierce the telepathic control. Could reach the authentic person trapped beneath. The question now was whether they could find a way to do it when de Vries wasn't able to immediately reassert his dominance.
It had only served to show the true, terrifying extent of their enemy's reach. And the deep difficulty they faced in trying to shatter the beautiful bars of these mental cages.
***
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