The Omission Index, Ch 16: The Gilded Cage Pt. 1
A telepathic con man preys on the wealthy in Oaxaca. SHEPARD must stop a sophisticated, mind-bending heist before more fortunes are lost.
SERIALIZED FICTIONTHE OMISSION INDEX
11/18/202516 min read


Tina Schweppes had never felt such a profound sense of joyous purpose as she did signing away the last of her family's fortune, a beatific smile fixed on her lips even as her loyal housekeeper, Inez, watched from the doorway with an unspoken dread that was a discordant note in the sun-drenched perfection of her Oaxacan villa.
The heavy, old silver pen, a leftover from her grandfather's powerful banking empire, moved across the crisp legal papers with a smooth, satisfying glide. Each flourish of her signature was a release, an unburdening, like shedding old, heavy skins to reveal something new, light, and wonderfully, brightly pure. Six months ago, she'd sat in a different chair, in Dr. Morrison's sterile office, listening to the words "Stage Two" and "aggressive treatment" echoing in her ears like a death knell. The diagnosis had shattered her carefully constructed world of luncheons and board meetings, leaving her staring at the hollow meaninglessness of her inherited existence. But that was before Alvaro had found her - or perhaps she had found him - in the quiet desperation of her newfound mortality.
Across the polished mahogany of the grand library table sat Señor Alvaro Herrera. His presence was comforting, his dark, intelligent eyes filled with a gentle, almost worshipful understanding. He was, Tina thought with a surge of grateful affection, her spiritual guide, a soulmate who had finally shown her the true path to fulfillment after so many years lost in the golden, empty cage of her inherited wealth. The "Herrera Foundation for Cultural Renaissance," his quietly brilliant project, would do such good with these assets - saving native art, funding local schools, helping start a new golden age for Oaxaca. It was a legacy far grander, far more meaningful, than simply holding onto stocks and bonds.
"There," she said, her voice a little breathless as she signed the final page. This transferred her beloved Degas sculpture, the last important piece of her collection. A small, almost unnoticeable sigh of relief escaped her. It was done. She felt… light. Free.
Señor Herrera's smile was saintly, radiating a calm approval that warmed her to her core. "Magnificent, Tina. Truly magnificent. Your generosity, your vision… it will echo through generations." His voice was like a song, rich and soothing. Each word resonated with an almost sacred truth that settled deep in her bones. He hadn't pressured her, not once. He had simply… shown her the path, shown her the undeniable logic, the spiritual need, for her actions. He'd helped her understand that true wealth wasn't in owning, but in giving, in becoming a channel for positive change.
She glanced towards the doorway where Inez lingered. The lines around her mouth were deep-set, her expression shuttered against the scene. Poor Inez. She didn't understand. She was too stuck in the old ways, in the material world. Tina had tried to explain, to share the bright clarity that now filled her, but Inez had only looked at her with those sad, worried eyes, muttering about "wolves in sheep's clothing" and "the devil knowing how to quote scripture." Tina felt a pang of pity for her housekeeper's limited understanding, but it was quickly swallowed by the overwhelming wave of joyful certainty that washed over her.
This was right. This was her destiny.
Señor Herrera gently gathered the signed documents. His movements were precise, respectful. "The Foundation's auditors will finalize the transfers immediately. You have done a truly remarkable thing today, Tina. You have risen above."
Risen above. Yes, that was exactly how it felt. Like she had finally risen above the small concerns, the endless worries of managing an estate, of being merely 'Tina Schweppes, the heiress.' Now, she was Tina Schweppes, benefactor, visionary, a force for beauty and enlightenment. She felt a sudden, almost giddy urge to celebrate, to share this deep joy. Perhaps a small, intimate dinner party? She could invite Señor Herrera, of course, and a few of the other like-minded, spiritually awakened people he had recently introduced her to, fellow philanthropists who also understood the bliss of giving away wealth.
"You must stay for lunch, Alvaro," she insisted, already picturing the menu, the flowers, the perfect, celebratory atmosphere.
He bowed his head, a gesture of graceful acceptance. "It would be my honor, Tina. To share in this moment of your… liberation."
As Inez, her expression unreadable, finally left the doorway, presumably to instruct the cook, a single tear traced a warm path down her cheek, the final punctuation on her new freedom. She had never felt so alive, so purposeful, so utterly, blissfully free from the crushing weight of a fortune that had been her prison.
***
The Oregon drizzle, a relentless, grey sheet hammering against the reinforced window of his lab, was doing nothing to improve Reid's mood. He was three lukewarm coffees and a mountain of pointless reports deep into a Monday that already felt like a Thursday. The framed photo on his desk - Dr. Sarah Chen, SHEPARD's former lead psychologist, caught mid-laugh at last year's Christmas party - stared back at him with eyes that would never open again. Six months in the ground, thanks to a "routine" telepathic assessment that turned out to be anything but routine. The brass had called it an "unforeseen psychic feedback incident." Reid called it what it was: his partner dying because he'd pushed her to probe too deep, too fast. These days, every case felt like walking through Sarah's ghost.
He was trying to make sense of some country person's claim that their prize-winning cow had been abducted by glowing spheres in rural Montana. Cows. Seriously. That's what SHEPARD had him chasing these days. He slammed the "File Under 'Crank'" key with more force than necessary when the priority alert klaxoned through his computer - a jarring, high-pitched shriek that meant actual trouble, not just confused cows. About damn time.
He ripped open the flagged file: Cross-Border Financial Funnies - Rich Folks Gone Wild - Oaxaca, Mexico. Source: Interpol's Useless Cops (preliminary WTF) & SHEPARD's Own Damn Spy Network (SLAMP). Reid snorted. SLAMP. Sounded like something you'd get from bad seafood. Still, the data looked… interesting, in a 'how the hell are they doing this?' kind of way.
On the surface, it was rich people doing rich people things: moving money around, donating to fancy-sounding charities, probably trying to avoid taxes like usual. All legal as could be, signed, sealed, delivered. The charities were a tangled mess of "Foundations for Fluffy Kittens" and "Institutes for Deep Thoughts," all conveniently registered in places where the only things getting hidden were financial records. Standard stuff for the super-rich.
Except.
His cross-referencing programs, running on SHEPARD's powerful mainframe computer, started flagging unusual things when he linked the "donors" with their known psychological profiles in the agency's database. Tina Schweppes, an old woman apparently so cheap she squeaked when she walked, suddenly starts giving away Picassos like party favors to the "Herrera Foundation for Making Oaxaca Groovy Again." Arthur Finch, a corporate shark who'd sell his own grandmother for a good profit, abruptly sells off his tech empire to fund some "Global Harmony Racket." Then there's this German old-timer, Baron von Ketchup or whatever, selling off the family castle to bankroll the "Institute for Talking to Your Inner Alien."
The common thing, besides Oaxaca and a sudden dislike of their own cash, was how fast and happy they were about it all. These weren't carefully planned donations; these were financial floods, wiping out family fortunes and angering financial advisors left and right. And when anyone dared to question it, the newly enlightened "donors" went full-on cult member, babbling about finding their true purpose and telling their families to get lost. They weren't just willing; they were overjoyed to be broke.
A slow grin spread across Reid's face. The satisfying pop of his knuckles was the starting gun. This wasn't some boring tax evasion. Reid's focus sharpened. The usual haze of boredom burned away. This was the real thing.
He cracked his knuckles and pulled up the financial tracking interface. The screen flickered to life, displaying a complex web of interconnected accounts and shell companies. He fed in the charity names - Herrera Foundation, Global Harmony Initiative, Institute for Esoteric Studies - and watched as the algorithms began their work.
Lines of code scrolled past, each one representing another financial transaction being analyzed, cross-referenced, traced. The first results appeared as pulsing red dots on a world map, scattered across tax havens and offshore banking centers. Reid leaned forward, watching the connections form.
"Come on, you bastard," he muttered, fingers dancing across the keyboard. "Where's the real money going?"
The program crunched through thousands of transactions per second, following digital breadcrumbs through the labyrinth of international finance. Cayman Islands... Jersey... Monaco... each ping of the sonar-like tracking system bringing him closer to the truth.
Then, suddenly, the scattered red dots began converging, drawn like iron filings to a magnet. Multiple data streams coalesced into a single, fat pipeline flowing south. Reid's pulse quickened as account numbers flashed across the screen, bank routing codes, corporate registration numbers.
And there it was, highlighted in brilliant yellow on his monitor: ALIENTO DORADO S.A. - Primary Account Balance: $47,832,645 USD
"Golden Breath," Reid translated aloud, a triumphant grin spreading across his face. "Cute. Real subtle, jerks."
The screen updated in real time as more transactions processed. The balance climbed: $47,954,723... $48,101,892... Someone was feeding this account like a starving beast, and recently.
He pulled the SLAMP field reports from their Oaxacan spies. Local gossip was buzzing about some smooth-talking con man. He called himself Señor Alvaro Herrera one day, 'El Maestro' the next, probably 'Shiny Happy Jesus' on weekends. This character was suddenly very popular with the rich expatriates, whispering sweet nothings about spiritual awakenings and meaningful legacies into the ears of every wealthy retiree south of the border. And they were eating it up, practically throwing their property deeds and stock certificates at him.
No guns, no threats, no obvious force. Just… charm. Enough charm to make Scrooge McDuck sell his money bin and donate it to a flock of very persuasive seagulls.
Reid felt that familiar prickle, the one that meant he was about to earn his paycheck. This wasn't slick salesmanship. This was mind control, pure and simple. The psych profiles, the sudden personality changes, the almost ecstatic joy in giving away all their money… it screamed psychic manipulator. A telepath, probably a high-level one, getting these over-privileged old folks to dance to his tune.
He shot a priority flag straight to Cromwell's desk, attaching his raw analysis: Suspected Class Three Telepathic Coercion, Oaxaca. Multiple rich targets compromised, actively being robbed. Financial loss significant and ongoing. Smells like a pro. Recommend immediate full team deployment: Hale for the mental stuff, Kwan for the comforting, Knopff to break things if necessary, and me to figure out how this bastard's messing with their brains and their bank accounts. This isn't delicate, Director, this is a goddamn psychic heist.
Cromwell's reply was, for once, almost immediate. "Acknowledged, Reid. Full team, flight at 0600. Coordinate with local contact, keep local police on a leash. And Reid? Try to keep the swearing out of your official reports."
Reid grinned. Delicate. Right.
He started prepping his field kit, already picturing the look on Knopff's face when he told him they were going to Mexico to stop a psychic gigolo from bankrupting a bunch of crazy old rich people. This was going to be way more fun than cow-napping spheres. The fancy homes of Oaxaca weren't just for show; they were being systematically looted by a con artist with one hell of a mental crowbar.
And Reid was looking forward to finding out exactly how it worked before he helped take it apart.
***
The dry, sun-baked heat of Oaxaca settled over Kwan like a heavy blanket the moment they stepped off the SHEPARD transport onto the runway of the small regional airport. It was a world away from the damp chill of Oregon. It was a riot of bright color, unfamiliar smells - woodsmoke, roasting chiles, the sweet, almost too-strong perfume of blooming jacaranda trees - and a touchable, ancient energy that hummed beneath the surface of the bustling modern city.
The sensory overload hit him immediately - a cascade of emotions from hundreds of strangers in the terminal, their hopes and fears and mundane concerns all bleeding into his consciousness like watercolors in rain. Kwan pressed his fingertips against his temples, centering himself with a breathing technique Dr. Chen had taught him years ago. In through the nose, out through the mouth. Build the walls. Keep the noise out. The familiar pang of loss squeezed his chest - Sarah would have loved this place.
Hale, beside him, looked even more withdrawn than usual, already quietly filtering the intense sensory and mental input. Knopff scanned their surroundings with his usual calm watchfulness, while Reid was probably already noting down local radio frequencies.
Their first contact was not a welcoming group. He was a small, impeccably dressed Oaxacan lawyer named Mateo Vargas.
His office, tucked away in a cool, stone courtyard off the main square, smelled faintly of dust and old paper. Señor Vargas represented the estranged nephew of Baron von Kessler, one of the names on Reid's list of suddenly charitable expatriates. Vargas was nervous, his fingers constantly adjusting his perfectly knotted silk tie. His English was precise but hesitant.
"The Baron, he has always been… eccentric, you understand, Agent Kwan," Vargas explained, dabbing his forehead with a linen handkerchief despite the coolness of the office. "But this… this sudden desire to give away centuries of family property, to fund this… this 'Institute for Esoteric Studies' run by a man no one has ever heard of until six months ago… it is, shall we say, alarming to my client." He lowered his voice. "The Baron now speaks only of 'transcendence' and 'cosmic harmony.' He has cut off all contact with his family, accusing them of being 'stuck in materialism'."
This "man no one has heard of" was, Kwan suspected, their suspect, likely using one of his many fake names - Señor Alvaro Herrera, El Maestro, or some other equally grand title. Vargas gave them the Baron's last known address, a secluded hacienda in the hills overlooking the city, and the name of another recent, high-profile "benefactor" whose family was similarly upset: Tina Schweppes.
Tina Schweppes' villa was a sprawling creation of sun-baked adobe, cool tiled courtyards, and lush, vibrant gardens overflowing with hibiscus and bougainvillea. The air here smelled of expensive French perfume, old money, and an almost aggressive display of planned peacefulness. A stoic, elderly housekeeper with eyes that had seen too much, Inez, led them into a magnificent, sun-drenched living room.
Tina Schweppes herself was a surprise. Kwan had expected someone frail, perhaps confused, easily manipulated. Instead, the woman who greeted them was radiant, almost unnervingly so. In her late sixties, impeccably dressed in flowing white linen, her silver hair styled perfectly, she radiated an almost manic energy. Her eyes shone with a passionate, almost unsettling light.
"Agents!" she sang out, her voice surprisingly strong. She offered them tiny cups of potent, cinnamon-laced Oaxacan chocolate. "How lovely of you to call. Though I must confess, I'm not entirely sure why official gentlemen such as yourselves would wish to speak with little old me." She laughed, a bright, brittle sound.
Kwan, using his most gentle, non-threatening manner, began. "Mrs. Schweppes, we understand you've recently made some… significant charitable decisions. We're simply conducting a routine inquiry into certain international foundations, ensuring everything is proper."
Tina's smile widened, becoming almost saintly. "Oh, but it is more than proper, Agent Kwan! It is… a calling! A liberation!" She clasped her hands together, her eyes sparkling. "For so long, I was a prisoner of my possessions, you see. Weighed down by all that… stuff." She waved a dismissive hand that included the priceless Zapotec pottery, the Diego Rivera sketches on the walls, the antique silver. "But then, I met Alvaro. Señor Herrera. Such a visionary! He helped me understand. He showed me the path to true spiritual wealth."
Hale, quiet until now, asked, "And this path involved giving away your material assets, Mrs. Schweppes?"
"Precisely!" she exclaimed. "To free myself! To allow that wealth to do good in the world, through the Herrera Foundation! Preserving culture, uplifting the spirit! It's the most wonderful, most purposeful thing I've ever done." She leaned forward, her gaze intense, almost hypnotic. "You gentlemen, you deal with the darker side of life, I imagine. But here, in Oaxaca, under Alvaro's guidance, there is such light! Such clarity!"
Kwan felt a deep unease settle over him. Tina Schweppes was not just convinced; she was utterly, unshakably, joyful. There was no flicker of doubt in her eyes, no hesitation in her voice. It was an unnatural, almost aggressive level of belief.
Beneath the surface of her radiant happiness, he sensed a strange hollowness, like an echo in an empty, gilded hall. He also detected a faint, almost unnoticeable tremor of anxiety - a flicker of fear she quickly and automatically papered over with another bright smile, an imitation of joy so flawless the seams were almost invisible.
For just a moment, as she gushed about her "spiritual awakening," Kwan caught something else - a brief, involuntary flash of memory that slipped through her mental defenses. He saw a sterile hospital room, heard the distant echo of a doctor's voice saying words like "aggressive" and "time." The image was gone in an instant, but the cold knot of terror that accompanied it lingered in his empathic senses like smoke.
The contradiction between the memory and her current euphoria sent a sharp spike of pain through Kwan's temples. He pressed his fingers against his forehead, fighting back the empathic overload. Someone else's fear, not yours, he reminded himself, but the boundaries felt dangerously thin.
He could also feel Hale beside him, very still, his mental senses undoubtedly working overtime, sifting through the layers of this rich, unsettling appearance.
As they spoke, Inez, the housekeeper, moved silently in the background, refilling water glasses. Her expression was carefully neutral, but Kwan caught her eye for a fleeting moment. In that brief contact, he saw it all: a deep and helpless frustration that contradicted every ecstatic word from her employer.
***
The late afternoon sun, a molten gold disc sinking behind the jagged peaks of the Sierra Madre mountains, cast long, theatrical shadows across the perfectly kept gardens of Hacienda Aliento Dorado. Inside, in the cool, high-ceilinged expanse of his private study, Lucian de Vries, known to his current followers as the kind Señor Alvaro Herrera, savored the last drops of an obscenely expensive, single-estate mezcal. The scent of night-blooming jasmine, a fragrance he particularly liked for its intoxicating, almost drug-like quality, drifted in through the open archways.
He idly swirled the amber liquid in his crystal glass, a faint, self-satisfied smile playing on his lips. The Tina Schweppes divestment had been… remarkably smooth. Almost disappointingly so.
The old heiress, so long starved for purpose, for meaning beyond the sterile accumulation of her ancestors' wealth, had been pathetically eager to accept the story he'd so carefully created for her. A few well-placed suggestions about legacy, a subtle amplification of her hidden anxieties about death and irrelevance, a carefully crafted vision of herself as a grand patroness of the arts and a spiritual leader… and she had practically thrown her fortune at his feet. It was, he thought, like coaxing a ripe fruit from an overloaded branch. Child's play, really.
Child's play. The phrase brought an unwelcome memory floating to the surface: his eight-year-old self, standing in the grand foyer of the de Vries estate, watching his father - red-faced and sweating - grovel before a sneering American oil baron's son. "Please, Mr. Ashworth, surely we can work something out. The family has been in this house for three centuries..." But the young Ashworth, barely twenty-five and already worth more money than God, had simply yawned and checked his gold watch. "Sorry, old boy. Business is business. You've got a week to pack." His father's psychic shields had crumbled that day, and Lucian had felt every humiliating wave of his desperation, his shame, his impotent fury at a world where accident of birth trumped centuries of breeding and culture. These people, these nouvelle riche parasites, they understood nothing of true worth, true heritage. They simply accumulated, consumed, discarded. Well, now it was his turn to do the discarding.
His gaze drifted to the array of monitors discreetly built into the antique, hand-carved mahogany bookcase. One displayed the current market values of the Schweppes art collection, already being quietly, efficiently sold off through a network of discreet international brokers. Another tracked the complex, multi-layered transfers of her financial assets into the maze-like accounts of Aliento Dorado S.A. A third displayed a detailed psychological and financial profile of his next carefully chosen 'project': Arthur Finch, the British venture capitalist currently vacationing in Oaxaca. Finch had a bluff, cynical exterior, but Lucian knew from his preliminary mental probes that it concealed a gnawing fear of obscurity and a desperate, unacknowledged longing for something… more.
He wasn't a thief. Thieves were crude. He was an artist, an architect of realities. He liberated money from the unworthy, the stagnant, the terminally bored. He offered his… clients… an experience, a grand, transformative story in which they could finally play the starring role they'd always secretly craved.
Philanthropist. Visionary. Spiritual seeker.
He merely provided the script, the stage, and the irresistible, internally generated motivation. The fact that these grand gestures always involved the complete transfer of their worldly goods into his, or rather, the Foundation's, capable hands was merely a necessary, if highly profitable, side effect.
He despised the "effortlessly" wealthy, the ones who had stumbled into fortunes by accident of birth or blind luck, yet had so little imagination, so little true appreciation for the exquisite possibilities their resources offered. They lived in their gilded cages, protected by their money, yet starved for genuine purpose, for a sense of their own importance. He merely helped them find it, though it was a purpose he had carefully designed and directed.
And in doing so, he sampled their lifestyles, lived in their opulent worlds, savored the second-hand thrill of their extravagant spending, before, of course, the well inevitably ran dry. It was, in its own way, a form of redistribution, a balancing of the cosmic scales. He provided them a profound spiritual lesson in the temporary nature of wealth. Their payment was, quite literally, everything they had.
His current focus was Arthur Finch. Lucian had already begun the delicate process of grooming him. A few "chance" meetings at exclusive art openings, a shared table at a high-end restaurant, conversations artfully steered towards Finch's unstated anxieties, his quiet dissatisfaction with a life of relentless buying. Lucian had subtly, telepathically, amplified Finch's budding boredom, his fear of leaving no meaningful mark on the world. He'd planted the seeds of a new, grand charitable venture - something involving sustainable agriculture and indigenous craft revival in the poorer Oaxacan mountains, something that would require significant, visionary investment. Something that would make Arthur Finch not just another rich businessman, but a savior, a legend.
Finch was proving to be a more challenging, more satisfying project than Tina Schweppes. His cynicism was a tougher shell to crack, his ego stronger. But Lucian could already feel the first hairline fractures appearing, the first tendrils of his influence taking root. He relished the intricate dance of mental seduction, the subtle nudges, the carefully amplified desires, the slow, meticulous wearing down of skepticism.
He took another sip of the mezcal. Its smoky complexity was a pleasing contrast to the cool, jasmine-scented air. The SHEPARD agents who had visited Tina Schweppes earlier today were a minor, predictable annoyance. He'd sensed their probing, their professional suspicion, from the moment they'd entered the Schweppes villa.
Amateurs.
They were looking for crude force, for threats, for visible strings. They wouldn't find any. His methods were far too refined, his influence too deeply, too willingly, embraced by his subjects. By the time these slow federal agents pieced anything together, Arthur Finch would be another ecstatic benefactor, his fortune safely absorbed into the ever-growing funds of Aliento Dorado.
And Lucian de Vries would be orchestrating another masterpiece of manipulated desire, another soul "liberated" into blissful, penniless enlightenment. The game, he thought with a flicker of cold amusement, was far too enjoyable to stop now.
***
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