#SuperViral, Ch 5: The Serpent's Tongue of San Cristobal Pt. 5
Amidst a deadly storm, Aisha, Sofia, and Illian send a desperate SOS from a mountain peak. Their risky act unleashes both hope and a fierce hunt.
SERIALIZED FICTION#SUPERVIRAL
8/10/202513 min read


The storm arrived as if they had called it. It was a wild mix of wind, sleet, and freezing rain that clawed at the mountains. Under its chaotic cover, Aisha, Sofia, and Illian began their climb. The darkness was total. The path was lit only by Illian's amazing night vision and the occasional, terrifying flash of lightning that briefly showed the jagged peaks against the dark, bruised sky. The wind shrieked, a physical force that tore at their parkas and tried to peel their grips from the ice-slicked ledges.
Hours later, beaten, soaked, and freezing, they reached the top of Puma Rumi. It was an empty, wind-blasted knife-edge of rock, offering no shelter. While Sofia and Aisha, their teeth chattering, huddled behind a small outcrop of rock, watching the swirling darkness below for any sign of patrols, Illian worked with frantic, desperate energy. His fingers, numb with cold, fumbled with wires and a battered satellite phone Aisha had kept hidden. He connected it to his strange, quickly-built antenna setup.
"Almost… almost…" he muttered. His breath puffed out white in the freezing air. His face was lit by the faint glow of the phone's screen. The wind shrieked, threatening to rip his fragile device from his hands.
Suddenly, a weak signal bar flickered to life on the phone. "Now, Aisha! Quickly!"
Aisha scrambled forward. Her own fingers were stiff and clumsy as she turned on the coded messaging app and started the pre-prepared data upload. It was a compressed file, a digital cry for help containing everything: their estimated location based on Illian's knowledge of the stars visible through breaks in the storm; a summary of the K'anchay's desperate situation; firsthand accounts of Rojas's terrible acts that she had carefully gathered in quiet K'anchay whispers; the few, precious, secret audio recordings Sofia had managed to make of Guardia Civil threats in Pukarumi before running away; and an urgent plea for immediate help for the K'anchay, and rescue for herself and Sofia. She hit 'send.' Her prayer was a silent echo of Illian's earlier wish for help from the storm spirits. One message went to Chloe, another to her main emergency journalist contact.
The progress bar crawled very slowly. Each second felt like forever, stretched tight by the howling wind and the fear of being found. Sofia hissed a warning. Her eyes were wide. She pointed down the slope. Through a brief break in the sleet, they saw it: the faint, tell-tale bobbing lights of a Guardia Civil patrol. They were much closer than they should be, slowly working their way up a lower path.
"They're coming!" Sofia breathed, terror in her voice.
"Pisiña! Almost!" Illian urged, his eyes glued to the phone.
The progress bar reached ninety-nine percent… then, with a small, triumphant chime that was almost lost in the storm, 'TRANSMISSION COMPLETE.'
"Done!" Aisha cried, yanking the cable.
But the relief didn't last long. A harsh shout echoed up from below, carried on the wind. They had been spotted. The bobbing lights were now moving faster, angling directly towards their exposed spot.
"This way!" Illian yelled. He was already taking apart his equipment with lightning speed. He knew these peaks like the back of his hand. He grabbed Aisha and Sofia, pulling them away from the summit. They didn't go back down the way they had come. Instead, they went along a dangerous, almost invisible goat track that ran beside a sheer cliff. He moved with the desperate quickness of a mountain creature. He kicked loose a shower of small stones and loose rock further down the slope, a deliberate attempt to mislead their pursuers.
Shouts and the barking of dogs echoed behind them as they scrambled into the deeper darkness. The storm was their only ally. The risk had been taken. The message was out. Now, all that was left was to survive the immediate, terrifying consequences.
The K'anchay, their faces showing even more tiredness, had to move again. The close call at the pass had proven their worst fears: Rojas's trap was tightening. They went deeper into the Cordillera Esmeralda mountains, into land so far away and hard to live in that their old stories called it the "Land of Frozen Tears." Each move was harder than the last. The land was more brutal. The hiding places were less safe. Little Mayu's condition got worse. Her small, feverish body was a constant, painful reminder of how alone and helpless they were. Her weak coughs echoed in the thin air, a sound that wore down Aisha's already stressed nerves.
Sometimes, on Illian's salvaged shortwave radio, which crackled with static, they would hear bits of news from Villa Esmeralda. Rojas's propaganda machine was working hard. Aisha was no longer just a meddling journalist. She was now "La Serpiente Extranjera" - The Foreign Serpent. They said she was a dangerous terrorist who had snuck into their peaceful highlands. They claimed she was working with "K'anchay separatists" and "enemies of the state" to cause chaos and division. Her image, roughly changed, flashed across wanted posters in towns. Rumors of a large reward for her capture, or any information leading to it, reached them through quiet messages passed along the unseen K'anchay communication network - a shepherd who had gone too close to a checkpoint, a cousin with connections in a faraway village.
Aisha watched a mother break a stale flatbread in three for her children. The snap echoed in the cave. My fault. The thought was a shard of ice. She flinched as Mayu's cough rattled in the quiet. She'd wanted to amplify their voices. Instead, she had brought the tyrant's army. The dead static from her contacts was the only reply, a roar of nothing.
One evening, huddled in a damp, windy cave that offered little protection from the biting cold, she finally told Tayta Apaza how desperate she felt. He was the elder whose calm presence had been a quiet source of strength for the group. "Tayta," she whispered, her voice hoarse, "I am so sorry. I have brought this… this ruin upon you. If I had never come…"
Tayta Apaza, his ancient eyes reflecting the small firelight, slowly shook his head. He reached out a gnarled hand and placed it gently on her arm. His touch was surprisingly firm. "Ama llakikuychu, ususi," he said. His K'anchay was soft but strong. (Do not grieve so, daughter.) "The storm was gathering long before you arrived. Rojas… men like him… they are a bitter wind that blows through these mountains every few generations. They try to pull up the oldest trees, to silence the deepest springs."
He looked towards Mayu, who lay sleeping restlessly. Sofia and her mother were tending to her. "Our fight for who we are, for Pachamama, for the memory of our ancestors… it is an ancient fight, Aisha. It did not begin with you, and it will not end if you are captured." He paused, then met her eyes. A flicker of something fierce, unbreakable, was in them. "You… you made the sky listen, even if only for a moment. You showed the world the serpent's true face. That is not a small thing. Before, our suffering was a silent one, known only to the condors and the mountain spirits. Now… now there is an echo. And an echo in these mountains…" He let the sentence hang in the cold air.
Mama Nati, her fingers never still as she combed wool by the fire, added her own dry, rustling voice. "The oldest threads are woven with sorrow. And with strength. The pattern vanishes under dust, under fear. But it remains. You held a piece of our pattern to the light."
Their words, filled with the old wisdom of a people who had survived centuries of hardship, offered a small bit of comfort. But they could not completely get rid of the cold dread that gripped Aisha. An echo. A pattern in the light. Aisha shivered, pulling the thin blanket tighter. Fine words were no shield against bullets. Hope was a flicker in the biting wind, and the wind was rising. The agonizing wait continued. Each passing day felt like a heavier stone on their shared spirit.
Aisha tried to keep the group's morale up. She told old stories around the fire, ones her grandparents had told her. She listened to the K'anchay's stories about their history and traditions. She sang quiet, slow lullabies to the younger children at night, when the wind was less angry and their voices could be heard without bringing soldiers. But she knew the cracks in her own spirit were showing. She couldn't hide her fear. And each time the Guardia Civil patrols got too close, or someone's stomach growled from hunger, she knew her face showed her shame.
Mayu's coughing and fever continued, but no one dared go into a town to seek help. They knew that doing so would likely lead to their capture and torture. Even worse, Mayu was not the only one falling ill. Several members of the K'anchay were getting weaker from a combination of lack of food and poor shelter. Aisha herself had been sick for a week or so, but had gotten better. The others were not as lucky.
The air in the shallow cave felt old and smelled of sickness and hopelessness. Mayu's breathing was a faint, shallow sound. Two more children were now weak with fever. Even Tayta Apaza's calm strength seemed to be breaking under the pressure. His eyes held a new, deep sadness. Aisha, huddled in a thin blanket, felt the last bits of her own hope disappearing.
The painful wait had stretched into nearly two weeks. Each sunrise brought only a fresh reminder of how alone they were and how Rojas's trap was tightening.
Then, Illian, who had been constantly, almost hopelessly, fiddling with the shortwave radio, suddenly froze. He pressed the crackling speaker to his ear. His forehead wrinkled in deep concentration. Then his eyes widened. He waved frantically for silence.
Through the static, a faint, clipped voice came through in English. It sounded like a strange, out-of-place farming report - something about an unusual frost affecting coffee beans in a faraway Colombian area. It specifically mentioned that "the Polyglot variety" was especially at risk but that "rescue efforts for the Emerald crop are being mobilized from higher ground."
Aisha's heart leaped. Polyglot. Emerald. It was a secret coded phrase. She and Chloe had made it up years ago for extreme emergencies. It was hidden in a normal-sounding, real news item that could be broadcast on international shortwave radio. Rescue efforts… mobilized from higher ground. Help was coming. But where? How? The message was frustratingly unclear, designed to be meaningless to anyone but her.
Illian, understanding the change in Aisha's face even if he didn't understand the exact words, managed to tune the radio a little better. The farming report faded. It was replaced by a very short bit of a different broadcast - a quick, almost hidden burst of numbers. Coordinates.
"Puma Rumi," Illian breathed. His eyes were wide with a mix of terror and growing hope, after Aisha quickly translated the numbers and checked them against his mental map. "They are signaling Puma Rumi. But… that is impossible. It is too open. Too high now. The Guardia…"
It was impossible. Or so it seemed. But it was their only signal. The rescue spot was the very place where they had sent their desperate message. It was a location Rojas would surely have under close watch. It was either an incredibly bold and clever plan or a suicidal trap.
The decision was made in quiet, urgent whispers. There was no other choice. To stay meant a slow, certain death for Mayu and the other sick children, and eventual capture for them all. To go to Puma Rumi was to risk everything on a coded whisper. Tayta Apaza, his face grim, made the call. A small, fast group would go: Aisha, Sofia, Illian (for his tech skills and knowledge of the pass), and two of their strongest, quietest hunters as guards. They would take Mayu, wrapped carefully, hoping against hope. The rest of the K'anchay would scatter further. They would create distractions if needed, praying to their mountain spirits.
The journey back to Puma Rumi was a nightmare climb. It was fueled by a desperate, adrenaline-filled hope. They moved only in the deepest darkness of night. Every shadow was a potential enemy. Every gust of wind carried the imagined sound of approaching boots. Mayu was a feather-light, burning weight in Sofia's arms.
As they got near the dangerous pass, the first faint hint of dawn painted the sky a bruised purple. They saw them: not the Guardia Civil, but two figures, cloaked and hard to see clearly, outlined against the growing light at the very top. They were not in uniform.
One of the K'anchay hunters let out a low, warning hiss. But then, one of the figures raised a hand, palm open - a universal sign of peace. And as the light grew, Aisha recognized the type of high-powered satellite phone one of them held. It was the same model used by the international human rights group she had sent her desperate SOS to.
They were rescue workers, not soldiers. Professionals in high-risk rescues, sent in by the NGO. The NGO had clearly used Chloe's information and the international pressure that followed to set up this incredibly risky, deniable rescue.
The meeting was quick and tense. The rescue workers - a man and a woman, their faces calm but all business - spoke in short, clipped English. They had a very short time. A helicopter was waiting in a hidden valley on the other side of the mountain range, across the border. Rojas's forces were indeed active, but the storm and the sheer boldness of returning to Puma Rumi had, for now, worked in their favor.
There was no room for everyone. The pain of that fact was a fresh, brutal wound. Sofia, her face streaked with tears, insisted on going with Aisha. She wanted to be a voice for her people, to make sure Mayu got help. Tayta Apaza, his eyes filled with unbearable sadness but also fierce pride, trusted Mayu to their care. He and the other K'anchay would not leave their mountains, their Pachamama. They would continue their ancient fight. Their resistance was now fueled by the knowledge that their story was finally being heard.
The goodbyes were short, choked with emotion. Aisha clutched the q'aytu Sofia's grandmother had given her. It was like a promise etched into her soul. Then, with the rescue workers leading the way, they began the dangerous descent down the other side of Puma Rumi. They were heading towards an uncertain freedom and a future that was forever changed.
As they scrambled down a narrow path, the distant but clear sound of a firefight erupted from back towards the K'anchay's last known hiding place. The sound of gunfire echoed from the peaks behind them. Aisha stumbled, a sour heat rising in her throat. The hunters. Their escape was being paid for, right now. The rescue was happening, but the war for San Cristobal's soul, and for its oldest threads, was far from over.
***
The roar of the helicopter blades was a loud, jarring sound. It was a harsh contrast to the quiet winds of the Cordillera Esmeralda mountains they were leaving behind. Aisha held Mayu, who was wrapped in a warm blanket given by the rescue workers. The child's small body was still too warm. Her breaths were shallow but, thankfully, a little easier. Sofia sat beside her. Her face was pale but determined. Her eyes were fixed on the disappearing mountain peaks, a silent, heartbroken goodbye to the land of her ancestors.
Safety, when it came, was the clean, impersonal feeling of an embassy in a nearby country. Doctors immediately took care of Mayu. Their quiet skill was very different from the desperate herbal remedies of the K'anchay. Long, tiring meetings followed. Aisha, running on very little energy and a fierce, protective anger, told everything to embassy officials, to the human rights workers who had risked so much, and to anyone who would listen. She explained the hidden meanings of "La Lengua Fina," the constant unfairness against the K'anchay, and the brutality of Rojas's crackdown. Sofia, her voice trembling but firm, confirmed every detail. She added her own terrifying experiences. The audio recordings she had managed to save, though in pieces, were very damaging to Rojas.
The world, it turned out, had been listening. Aisha's suddenly ended stream, her disappearance afterwards, and the coded SOS message had started a huge reaction. She was now a global figure. Many praised her as a hero, a symbol of journalistic courage. #SanCristobalTruth and #JusticeForKanchay trended for weeks. The K'anchay's suffering, once a hidden sadness in a remote mountain range, was now a major international human rights issue. Governor Rojas, though still holding onto power locally, faced international anger, punishments, and calls for investigation. His carefully built image was ruined.
But the victory also had a bitter side. A clever, anonymous propaganda machine worked hard and tirelessly against her. They twisted her rescue, saying it proved she was a foreign agent, a troublemaker sent to cause problems in a sovereign region. Fake videos of her in bad situations, or saying extremist things, spread widely. Articles that picked apart her "Super" abilities as inherently manipulative and dangerous filled the internet. They were designed to discredit her story, to paint her as an unreliable, emotionally unstable person. The fight for the truth was fierce, ugly, and fought with lies whose ultimate source remained worryingly unknown.
Through it all, something deep inside Aisha had changed. She scrolled past old photos on her phone-a smiling face in a vibrant market, a clever caption about verb conjugations. The memory felt like it belonged to someone else, someone shallow. A sour taste filled her mouth. Language wasn't a game anymore. It was a weapon.
Sofia, now a refugee, found her own voice in the middle of the chaos. She was no longer just a guesthouse worker caught between two worlds. She became a powerful, clear speaker for her people. Her story, alongside Aisha's, gave undeniable truth to their cause. She was the living proof of the K'anchay's strength.
Aisha's online platform changed. She lost some followers, those who had come for light entertainment and escape. But she gained millions more. They were drawn by her courage, by her strong commitment to exposing injustice. Her streams were different now. She still traveled, still explored languages, but with a new, sharper focus. She began to lift up K'anchay voices, regularly featuring Sofia and other K'anchay refugees, giving them a global stage. Her language analysis became a regular feature. She broke down coded hate speech and political manipulation not just in San Cristobal, but in other places where similar tricks were used. She taught her audience how to listen for unspoken meanings. She partnered with human rights groups, using her fame to raise money and awareness. And though she still didn't know who was truly behind the global anti-Super smear campaigns, she began to subtly, intelligently push back against their anonymous attacks. She deconstructed their false arguments and encouraged people to think critically.
Months Later.
The camera wasn't focused on a busy marketplace or a beautiful view. Instead, it showed Aisha Khan. She wasn't in her bright travel clothes, but in a simple, dark suit. She stood before a panel of serious-faced people at a UN human rights council subcommittee hearing. Her voice carried a new weight, a quiet authority that hushed the room. Her Cristobali, when she switched to it to quote a K'anchay elder, was not just fluent. It was filled with the pain and strength of a people she had fought alongside. She held up the q'aytu, its intricate pattern a stark map of survival in the polished room.
"These threads bind us to the truth," she said, her gaze sweeping across the delegates before finding the camera. "They remind us who we must protect. We have a duty to see they are not broken."
The camera zoomed in on her determined face, the face of @PolyglotPassport. She was a linguistic warrior, made strong in the fires of San Cristobal. Her journey was transformed, her purpose clear. She was ready for her next battle in a world that seemed determined to tear itself apart with words. The fight against "La Lengua Fina," in all its sneaky forms, and against the shadowy forces of lies, had only just begun.
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